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Donna Vitkauskas


Free Account, Rochdale, MA.

Commentaire 6

  • Peter Lawrence 08/01/2005 8:12

    Nice capture, personal preference, I like it.
    Peter
  • Donna Vitkauskas 06/01/2005 19:09

    Martin,
    Thanks for your views. I have to disagree with you. I like the way her head is tilted and she is sitting in front of the water not to the right side. Oh , this is a different pose (photo) from the black and white one I posted yesterday. I am glad however that you have givin me your point of view. I like to hear what others honestly think.
    Talk to you soon.
    D. :)
  • Martin Unger 06/01/2005 17:14

    Yes, that's a good portrait but I liked the b/w-version from yesterday more. Here I've got the feeling that Sarajane is falling to the left side, there's nothing to hold here there, I feel this angle is quite unnatural, too many oblique lines, something missing on the left side. Now I can also see why you cutted the other pic through the amulet (you say amulet here?), because otherwise the crop had become to large. For me, there could also be some more contrast in the picture, but that's a really personal thing.
    Don't misunderstand me, i don't want to say that this picture is bad, I just want to explain why I think the other one is better.
    (second version of this comment, I had just written one when my PC suddenly break down...)
  • Zdenek Baranek 06/01/2005 17:03

    Sehr schöne Aufnahme und ein schönes Model.Leider kann ich noch nich Englisch,aber ich bin bei Lernen.Gruß Zdenek
  • Freemember 001 06/01/2005 14:23

    very intensiv colours. may be the background more unsharp or not through her head.
    bg
    tom
  • JVision 06/01/2005 12:53

    Thats a very beautiful portrait!!
    Regards Jutta